Out Of Coffee: A Writing Lesson

Was about to write this blog article, when I picked up my cup of coffee.

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Oh, no.

 

Here we go. The blog article becomes a mini-book in itself. Conflict has started.

I am out of coffee.

Character goal – get more coffee.

Setback – coffee machine is downstairs.

Goal – I must go downstairs, with cold feet, and go to the coffee machine, and get more coffee.

Obstacle – laziness has set in, and I’m comfortably writing in this chair.

I have to overcome the setback (go downstairs), which is the same as my character goal. I must overcome the obstacle.

Foreshadowed conflict – my feet are cold. So that means:

The floor downstairs is colder

I’m going to stub my feet painfully.

Hans will order Rudolph to shoot the glass. Oh, wait, that’s Die Hard.

Growing conflict – I’m now losing the will to write, due to lack of caffeine.

The coffee downstairs has a time element to it. It’s growing increasingly bitter, since it’s two hours old. If I don’t hurry, it will be undrinkable, and symbolic death will happen in the story.

Break into Three moment – my Burmese cat looks cute, and I have to pet him.

I’m growing more despondent and weaker without the coffee, which is growing more bitter at a steady pace

CLOSE IN on Coffeepot, doing nothing. A bubble rises to the top of the coffee.
Pop.

Cut to: Nicholas slumped over in chair.
NICHOLAS
Coffee….

To be continued….

About the author

Screenplay writer and fiction author